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.: Where's my wonderland :. Speedpaint by Sammisha .: Where's my wonderland :. Speedpaint by Sammisha
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Please give me some critiques :P



Down you fell, deep into your mind
Off to wonderland, leaving what's real behind
You're a riddle I can't seem to read
Your love a fairytale, too hard to believe

Broken and sad as the tarnish on your crown
Nowhere to go but down
Caught up in yourself, nowhere to be found
No other way but down

Down, down, down
Down, down, down

Say your farewell too what's real
Like the pain that you feel
Welcome to Wonderland (It's dead)

Eat me or drink me
Seeing is believing
Wonderland, baby,
It's all in your head

Your cup runs over with emptiness
Chasing the hare of your innocence
Hide behind your cheshire smile
Once was vivid, was gray all the while

Broken and sad as the tarnish on your crown
Nowhere to go but down
Caught up in yourself, nowhere to be found
No other way but down

Down, down, down
Down, down, down

Say your farewell too what's real
Like the pain that you feel
Welcome to Wonderland (It's dead)

Eat me or drink me
Seeing is believing
Wonderland, baby,
It's all in your head


DO NOT TRACE, COPY, REFER, USE OR ANYTHING.

Everything belong to me but the song.
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i have always been fond of the time concept in art. i personaly love your color usage in all of your art. also your line quality. so i will start it of there. it really is lovely,

now i have to say that i wish you would have given your clocks the same attention as you did your charactor, they seem a bit rushed/not much care given to them. i think you should have spent a bit more time with them. the wings on that one clock could have used a lot more attention to.

even f you were trying to give it a traslusent look, i think you could have comomplished it a bit better though differnt techneques. when doing peices like this i would reconmend a ref, of wings and for the clocks. maybe have a tutorial of an artist you like up discribing how they did it and try to find your own way through their example.

i do like the colors in the back ground, im very fond of them. but i think the green swirls i see really take away from its effect. but thats just personal prefernce, i just dont like how the colors mesh together,

as for your figure itself, i like the line quality, essecialy in her torso, i wish you would have continued that same method all over her body. her back paw seems a little big, but again, personal preference, you might like the big look in them. but im just saying in comparision to how you had her front legs,

everything does seem a bit peicey, meaning they dont seem to flow on the same plain. like...eh, its hard to explain, they dont seem to have the same style throughout the piece, from the figure to your clocks to the background. not saying it doesnt together at all, cause it certianly does have a rhythem.

in all i do like it, dont change it or anything, but just keep what i said in mind for your next pieces ^^
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Madsie-moo Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh my gawsh! I love watching your speed paintings. There's so much stuff that I don't notice until I watch you draw it. Like the words. I didn't even see them until I watched the video.
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Sammisha Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah ah aww thanks :)
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HunaChima Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh my god baby it's gorgeous! ♥
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Sammisha Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks ! <3
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